In this week’s exercise, I’d like you to redraft two short texts into plain English.
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Here are the texts I’d like you to ‘translate’ into plain English:
This program promotes efficient water use in homes and businesses throughout the country by offering a simple way to make purchasing decisions that conserve water without sacrificing quality or product performance.
Once the candidate’s goals are established, one or more potential employers are identified. A preliminary proposal for presentation to the employer is developed. The proposal is presented to an employer who agrees to negotiate an individualized job that meets the employment needs of the applicant and real business needs of the employer.
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These texts come from the excellent website www.plainlanguage.gov